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Poems.Limited
by chardcastic Fri Dec 18, 2009 7:19 pm
*a four line poem:
*an eight line poem:
*etc..
questions? comments? reply in this thread. thank you.
- Spoiler:
- Love
Losing attention from the woman I admire
Or should I say the lady I want to acquire
Vowed to show the losing attention she desire
Even if the details I will face are like dires
*an eight line poem:
- Spoiler:
- Goodbyes
Gaining respect with each other
Obtains trust to one another
Offers you love like a lover
Do defined love as a teacher
But why is there always goodbye?
Yet they say that love is a lie
Exactly how a human die
So, should i say the word goodbye?
*etc..
Memories
Memories from the past are remembered so well
Even those memories that's difficult to dwell
Memories that needs another part, the sequel
Or are these memories the story's prequel?
-----Memories from the past are remembered so well
Even those memories that's difficult to dwell
Memories that needs another part, the sequel
Or are these memories the story's prequel?
questions? comments? reply in this thread. thank you.
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Re: Poems.Limited
by L'Jyen [♥] Sat Dec 19, 2009 1:45 pm
i love it hanzel..
it's nice..nakakatama sia XD
it's nice..nakakatama sia XD
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Re: Poems.Limited
by chardcastic Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:29 pm
salamat hanzel..
nakakatama ba talaga siya?
nakakatama ba talaga siya?
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Re: Poems.Limited
by Marz Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:38 am
^_^
nice one' '
I love it. . is that your own line. . cool
nice one' '
I love it. . is that your own line. . cool
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Re: Poems.Limited
by chardcastic Sun Dec 20, 2009 12:48 pm
Marz wrote:^_^
nice one' '
I love it. . is that your own line. . cool
yes, it's my own line. thanks for the complement.
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Re: Poems.Limited
by Patrick Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:42 pm
hehe. nice. :]
Keep it up po. Update mu lng po plagi pag may bago po. :D
Keep it up po. Update mu lng po plagi pag may bago po. :D
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by chardcastic Sun Dec 20, 2009 5:50 pm
Patrick wrote:hehe. nice. :]
Keep it up po. Update mu lng po plagi pag may bago po. :D
salamat.. cge, update ko lang pag may bago..
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Re: Poems.Limited
by L'Jyen [♥] Sat Dec 26, 2009 9:27 am
oo..nakakatama sia 
btw.. sa'n na iung "Goodbye"?
btw.. sa'n na iung "Goodbye"?
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.. nice poem ..![xP►[bianx'♥]](https://2img.net/u/3911/33/64/86/avatars/170-24.jpg)
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by chardcastic Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:15 am
bianx0o0 wrote:<img src="https://2img.net/h/oi30.tinypic.com/11vlmk5.jpg"> .. nice poem ..
thanks.
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by xP►[bianx'♥] Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:11 pm
@chardcastic .. ur welcome ..
btw it's really nice ..
love the 1st one :D
btw it's really nice ..
love the 1st one :D
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by chardcastic Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:44 am
ok. I'll try to make more.
thanks for the compliment.
thanks for the compliment.
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by L'Jyen [♥] Tue Jan 05, 2010 9:26 am
aiun..na-post na pala ang pangalawa..hihi
nice..aco una nakabasa :p
nice..aco una nakabasa :p
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Re: Poems.Limited
by Marz Thu Jan 14, 2010 3:14 am
I like your limited poems... I'll give you a repu for that..
share more... ^_^
share more... ^_^
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by L'Jyen [♥] Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:47 pm
Marz wrote:I like your limited poems... I'll give you a repu for that..
share more... ^_^
gumawa ca na din kuya marz..
@T: dagdagan mo pa aah? hihi
@T: dagdagan mo pa aah? hihi
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